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Julieta Holman's avatar

What a lovely poem! And your audio intro contained the phrase “in a state where grace might find me”. I’d insert that somewhere in steps 2,3, and 11. Do you know Christian Wiman, poet, essayist, Yale divinity scholar? Your linguistic sensibilities and content remind me of him. Keep writing!! I love listening to it, and/or reading. I never quite know what’s going to appear, but inevitably it’s smart, wise, gentle, and beautifully crafted. It’s like a cashmere blanket on a snowy evening by the warmth pf a roasting fire. Thank you!

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Chapin's avatar

Amazing poem. Structure. Rhythm. Content. And what a closing. So good. Thank you.

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